This here just proves my theory that all squicks disappear like smoke in the hands of a talented writer. You've really nailed the characters here, and the lovely interplay of a realistic sort of dom/sub relationship. The dialogue just about killed me - lovely stuff.
Yeah, what she said. I, too, must thank cruisedirector via switchknife for the link. This is totally not my cup of tea, kink-wise, mainly, I guess, because in anything but HP-fic my whole anal-retentive cleaning thing would become too much of an issue, and there are so many easier things to clean up (maybe too much mommying, too, after a certain number of diapers does one simply become unable to find this interesting?) On the other hand, this fic is absolute proof that I was dead wrong because you wrote it so damn well that it totally worked and was sexy and frightening in its intensity all at the same time. Eek! Anyway, I just had to say, well done! We need more adult Lucius-Severus fic where Lucius hasn't been turned into some vapid posturing idiot. I agree that he is one of the most fascinating of the characters and I love him paired with Severus for that reason--they feed each other's inner darkness and passion so very very well.
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Date: 2005-02-26 12:16 am (UTC)From:Yeah, what she said. I, too, must thank
Kudos on such marvelous writing!
-Rhi