I am sitting here, drinking coffee and eating tayberries and cream on a sunday afternoon...and reading this.
Reading this.
My goodness. I am...shocked that despite the warnings, I went ahead and read this. It was based on teh tsrength of your writing previous things that I went ahead and read this. What works: The matter of fact building of the situation, the incredible dialogue, and then building to the act itself, which is handle with the idea of conveying emotion and sensation, and not mere disgust.
Severus realisation that he is completely dominated by Lucius,a nd would do anything for him- anything- is a the punch to the gut, as is the realisation that he really does not want to hurt Lucius at all. And Lucius reveals himself in degrees. What a needful, greedy, absolutely horrid, sexy beast.
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Date: 2004-07-11 11:24 am (UTC)From:Reading this.
My goodness. I am...shocked that despite the warnings, I went ahead and read this. It was based on teh tsrength of your writing previous things that I went ahead and read this. What works: The matter of fact building of the situation, the incredible dialogue, and then building to the act itself, which is handle with the idea of conveying emotion and sensation, and not mere disgust.
Severus realisation that he is completely dominated by Lucius,a nd would do anything for him- anything- is a the punch to the gut, as is the realisation that he really does not want to hurt Lucius at all. And Lucius reveals himself in degrees. What a needful, greedy, absolutely horrid, sexy beast.
Thank you...I think. ( looks at coffee)